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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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I think this is a most charming portrait of a child and I love how you have captured the expression in her face, she is relating to the bird most credibly. Your use of line in the outline of her profile and on the bird is wonderfully subtle and effective - it emphasises the highlighted areas well. I love the dark tones, they play such an important part in the composition and give the drawing a good sense of balance.
The only criticism I would offer is the discolouration of the paper lets the drawing down and I suspect this is due to the quality of the photo. If at a later date you could adjust this or upload a better photo, I think your drawing would recieve the attention it deserves. You've achieved a lot in this drawing, well done
Your drawing is in the 'awaiting critique' folder at #Graphite-Gods and it would be good to know if you can understand English as my written French is very poor.
Please let me know if you would still like a critique, or if you would prefer someone else to do it who has a good command of French. Thank you